Two Suns

February 17, 2011 in Wordsmoker Poetry

I read yesterday in the news that

as early as a year from now,

and just for a couple of weeks,

there could be two suns in the sky.

A star is going to explode and they don’t know when,

but it could be soon!

We could use two suns.

Imagine the things that would not happen

If there were two suns in the sky.

Weeks without dark; imagine the things people wouldn’t say

to each other under two suns.

Imagine the awe.

We could use the distraction, I think.

When I was a kid, watching from the table that winter morning my father

threw my brother up against the glass door by his throat,

I think I had a bite of cereal in my mouth. Did I swallow it?

I didn’t do anything.

There will be other fathers and other sons, and if this star decides to explode

I think they might be different for a little while.

Everyone will!

People will gather outside. Work will be suspended, and men will not have time

to lay hands on their sons or their daughters.

They’ll walk with them and they’ll feel changed somehow.

They’ll try their best to answer their childrens’ feverish questions,

try to remember the thrilling phrasings

of the scientists, and patiently, and feeling like important harbingers

of knowledge bigger than anything they’ve known in their tired and dusty lives,

they’ll try explain what they can about this sudden and strange new blanket of light.


  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/berightback/ berightback

    This is so good! I wish I could think of something less banal to write as a response! Well, here, make do with a few more exclamation marks!!!! Anyway, I really liked this, it caught in my throat.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/chillbearlatrigue/ Chillbear Latrigue

    @ berightback: I’m with you. Loved the poem, but not exactly sure what to write about it. It certainly didn’t turn out the way I expected it to when I started it.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/bjonston/ BJonston

    Caught in my throat, too. Along with the thought that maybe we will all just die and wouldn’t that suck for my son.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/bjonston/ BJonston

    ^?

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/blix/ Blix

    I enjoyed the way it split into two paths going in the same direction. It’s like you’re juggling with words. Well done.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/dahlelama/ DahlELama

    I similarly wish I had a less banal response–and it seems like I should, since I minored in poetry–but all I have to say is that I loved this.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/mama-penguino-2-2-2/ Mama Penguino

    Poignant and yet there’s a light-heartedness, too, that only makes it break my heart a little more. So, so good. I’m a fan.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/fictionsinmotion/ Vaquero

    @ Mama Penguino: It’s like Jack Handey has a brother we didn’t know about.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/tristantzara/ tristantzara

    here’s to all the things people don’t say. or won’t. or can’t. and to the painfully rare, amazing things that they do. such as these words of yours.

    i must admit, always just when my arrogance (or pure stupidity) makes me think i understand the human soul, or even just a single human soul, which can seem so small compared to this vast universe– so vast that our meager view would be eternally changed by the appearance of another burst of light in the sky– well, it always becomes readily clear, one way or another, that i know nothing.

    so here’s to other worlds, to ther lives– and to that strange desperate quest bring the imaginary and the real, the possible and the actual,through some sort of dissonant harmony, into the fold of our so rapidly passing days…

    bravo, fd.

  • http://wordsmoker.com/help/members-3/kausaustralisandsaturn/ Worthless Emo

    Lovely