Wordsmoker Poetry

By ray of moon

By Aaron Altman
Published: March 19, 2009

Thank you for smiling,

for breaking trend

with wait-a-whiling,

and causing misery to end.

Thank you, friend,

for doing what you must -

leave sadness, forsaken,

and loneliness, nonplussed.

I’ll see you soon,

by light of day,

by ray of moon,

I’ll come your way

and we’ll have words

to leave us smiling

and time to lend

to wait-a-whiling.

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10 comments
  1. poisonville posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 10:21 am.

    Beautiful, Aaron.

  2. Vaquero posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 1:06 pm.

    You are the sweetest of the sweet, Mr Aaron.

  3. gecko posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 1:32 pm.

    Oh, my friend, this is lovely, and has made me smile all day.

  4. monkeyrash posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 1:53 pm.

    Aaron, that’s one lucky friend you’ve got there.

  5. IndianSlipper posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 2:14 pm.

    This was nice, until I imagined Adam from Idol reading/singing it. Sorry I just can’t get his “Ring of Fire” out of my head!

  6. Curly Q Tips posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 3:07 pm.

    Is this about the banking industry?

    (Awesomeness, AA, just wondermous.)

  7. Busyness posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 4:56 pm.

    Not only do I like this poem, but I am impressed by the word/phrase “wait-a-whiling”. I will now try to insert it into my daily conversations.

  8. pufflehuff posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 6:13 pm.

    I like this.

  9. LipstickLibrarian posted the following on March 19, 2009 at 9:13 pm.

    Aaron, you’re like e.e. cummings, but with capitals.

  10. PikaDar posted the following on March 22, 2009 at 12:43 am.

    Wait-a-whiling. Yes, Perfect. i’ve been wait-a-whiling for a long time. Aaron, you have moved from snark to hard hitter.

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